http://www.smor.tv/print-portfolio/bay-rock-magazine-spread/ Thu, 29 Dec 2011 05:53:40 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v= http://www.smor.tv/print-portfolio/bay-rock-magazine-spread/comment-page-1/#comment-2934 Sam Morris Mon, 15 Mar 2010 10:10:06 +0000 http://www.smor.tv/?p=219#comment-2934 That was a careless mistake. "comes from" should have definitely been moved up to the line above, thanks for pointing it out. That was a careless mistake. "comes from" should have definitely been moved up to the line above, thanks for pointing it out.

]]> http://www.smor.tv/print-portfolio/bay-rock-magazine-spread/comment-page-1/#comment-2923 Christina Fri, 12 Mar 2010 20:48:57 +0000 http://www.smor.tv/?p=219#comment-2923 I like this. It's simple but it works, only one suggestion. The last two sentences, you should take the last line and bring it up to complete it because you have an orphan and then 2 words at the end. I like this. It's simple but it works, only one suggestion. The last two sentences, you should take the last line and bring it up to complete it because you have an orphan and then 2 words at the end.

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